Hurrah, today is poetry day in the UK.Where would our world be without poets?
I sometimes forget I’m a poet.
Waving hello to all poets the world over I’ll share here a poem I wrote years back for an artist friend and her family.
… notes on a messy old woman …
in her art the charcoal mining hills
are shadow lands holding gold
and white mountains of china clay
spark New Jerusalem in her heart
she draws Cornish Cliffs rising black
from pale sands – jutting like mythic
creatures into a calm cobalt sea
beneath an impassive slate sky
she delights in the yellow of lemon
green of pear – shape of aubergine
textures of sunflower – curly kale
and the pink gleam on the skin
of fish – best caught on the day
each thing away from its home
…solitary objects …
alone in space – the pot – pan
cup – knife and fork she paints
like icons on white and says
… they speak for themselves …
when spring brings pungent earth
she plants narcissus and hyacinth –
geranium and rose – tomatoes – mint
clematis – azalea and rose again
she bends low to weed her garden
but not to wash the kitchen floor
nor does she mind a grimy table
sink – bowl – glass or plate
yet her home is bright with friends
walls are hung with paintings
shelves groan under books
colourful rugs blot out the dust
her stomach has hardened to bugs
and if a thing cracks or falls apart
one of her five children will come
to fix the chair – shelf – clock – tap
the leaking roof or creaking door
… her strategy works …
all objects she observes revert
to the empty spaces between them
Ashen, 2004
You may wonder what has been happening since my last post, to which many of you kindly responded in relation to my dream and my desolate, confused state, which was heartening.
The post coincided with my publisher coming clean after I had faithfully waited three years for the production work on Course of Mirrors to begin. Still, I’m thankful – at least the path is clear. I decided not to approach any of the giants. I’m taking control. Having had lots of time to compare self-publishing set-ups, I’ve chosen one that’s most respected in the trade and also stores and distributes books.
I believe strongly in Course of Mirrors – the book will be launched in spring 2017. I’ll keep my online friends updated. Once my first novel is on the road, I may crowdfund for the sequel … and a collection of my poetry.
‘Faith is the evidence of things not seen.’ – W Hutchinson Murray
Sorry, the layout of this page turned messy 🙂
Congratulations on resolve and clear intentions. Nothing like closing a door to find the appeal of others opening! Loved the poem. Reminded me of one i wrote for just such a character, a painter also.
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True. There’s great satisfaction in closing a door on false promises and disappointments. Thanks.
I’m glad I inspired you to dig up a poem you wrote for a friend, which I read, following your link below, and found deeply moving.
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I salute your “Joie de Vivre!”
Joe Rubin, Michigan, USA
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Thank you Joseph ☼ Best things for you there over the pond.
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P.S. Since your messy old woman’s cottage looks much like the person’s you reminded me of, I thought to follow suit. You can find it here https://philipparees.wordpress.com/2016/10/06/folly-cottage-poetry-day/
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Dear Philippa, I found your poem, Folly Cottage, incredibly moving, as an elegy of a woman’s life.
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Waving back – loving greeting from another sometime poet x
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Hi Diane, master of suspense. Your output is totally amazing to me. Too much on this year to keep up. I bet you have the growing and faithful readership you deserve.
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Poems are paintings and vice versa, keep up the great work!
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Lovely to meet a kindred soul, Richard. Your blog is an inspiration.
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Congratulations…..your text on the old woman and the news on you publicating ….. 🍂🍁🙂❤️
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Thank you dear. It’s going to be spring before the first book it out, Jenny, but at least the process is under way, the task is in hand.
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There is that famous quote from Einstein about messiness being related to intelligence (we all know it but i will quote it here again: “If a cluttered desk is a sign of a cluttered mind, of what, then, is an empty desk a sign?”).
I always feel right at home in messy places. i would love to come over one day for a cup of tea (we visited England this summer, searching for King Artur, a messy search indeed).
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Ha, that applies to my desk, which is drowning in folders and post-it notes. what a relief. Einstein would have been a cool friend to have 🙂
I try to keep order, I really do, in other areas of the house I manage better. You’re very welcome if you come this way.
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Lovely Ashen and very exciting! That sense of taking control – your own life and path in your own hands and the universe responding as it will when you commit –
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Yes. God knows why I waited so long to take the jump, and the risk, but my muse was getting very demanding.
Best luck to you, with your new book!!!
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Yes to poetry and color, and to taking control of your book. I’ll be first in line to purchase!
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Thanks Mary. This cheers ☼
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Poetry is all around us ~ Wonderful!
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It links us up in the spirit of experience, Thanks for your visit, Christy.
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I love your poem. And I’m so glad you’ve made a decision about ‘Course of Mirrors’. You’ll zoom ahead now, you’ll see :–)
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Thanks Katia. I’ll borrow the eagle wings my protagonist dreams about. After all the tilling a round of sailing on the upwind would be …. one can dare to imagine 🙂
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